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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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Ok Miss Nan! I had some help with this one. So, I will have to do it again. Maybe, SEVERAL TIMES. ~ By Sue ~ It wasn't long ago I tried to write Iambic meter seems to stress me out I tried so hard to get the meaning of Unstressed and stressed the syllables to count Frustrated I am once again this day Forever right I wish sometime to be I bought a book of words to help create These lines I place today upon this screen 12-5-02 |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
 with help or not, you did a great job Sue, keep them coming girl.Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you, Titia! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nicely done, Sue.  You're allowed a little help with your homework now and then. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
vlraynes Thank you for your reply. I want to get to where I can write iambic meter and get it right without any help at all. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hi Sue! I struggle with this stuff and am a lousy meter reader. I wonder where these other folks get their know-how. I enjoyed your poem and am so impressed with your efforts and growth. I'll hang in there if you will. Thanks for posting. Shenachie |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Stressed out or not you've got the meter right This Smart Chick knows which syllables to stress dumDA it's not - Iambic says daDUM Keep up the effort Sue - You're doing fine  |
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