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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

0 posted 1999-11-18 08:20 PM


I'll start with my archives - Then add more as we go along

HAIKU

The breath of new morn
Tiptoes upon cirrus blush
Fresh auroran dreams

Vilification
Acid Precipitation
Reforestation

SENYRU

Serendipity
A chance we take or lose for
All eternity




[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 11-20-1999).]
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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-11-19 11:33 AM


Gets out her dictionary....j/k Nan...nice ones, you certainly do have a vocabulary though

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)


Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap
2 posted 1999-11-19 03:06 PM


These are not like any haiku I've ever seen, but they are good -- give me some ideas, they do -- thanks Nan!

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.


jbouder
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since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534
Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash
3 posted 1999-11-19 03:11 PM


Dittos to Kess. These are different. I suppose Haiku don't necessarily have to sound like a fortune cookie. These were good, Nan. Especially the Serendipity 3-5-3. The conservationist one certainly gives the first one a '90's twist.

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Jim

"If I rest, I rust." -Martin Luther


RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
4 posted 1999-12-11 07:38 PM


Nan....I tried to do a Haiku....wanted to do a 4 stanza (separate poems) Haiku on the universe compared to spring.....I got so bogged down, I couldn't think!!!!
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