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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Miracle A Tanka By Paul Wilson Wishing on a star Hoping for a miracle Weeping for lost love Embrace freedom we have found Tears of joy now in my heart |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
A tanka of Love Miracle of Miracles Puts joy in all hearts A great healing for life's pain Sorrow heals and love remains. Beautiful tanka, Paul! Shenachie |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bridget~ Thank you for the lovely Tanka reply.This is my first try at Tanka so if anyone wants to help I would appreciate it...Paul |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Pretty awesome for a first try Paul! I really don't see that you need too much help. Just wanted to let you know I loved this October offering. Tammy |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Tammy~ Thank you for reading and your kind reply. Looking forward to the Nov. assignment...Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (10-28-2002 10:41 PM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Expect miracles They happen every day When we aren't looking |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Nan~ Thank you for your kind words. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
WOW! Great job!! I am so impressed. Huggles, Marti |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful tanka. Your did a wonderful job. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marti~ For you to be impressed I am impressed Thanks for the kind words...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue~ Thank you so much for the sweet words. I am trying to get better at these things...Paul |
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