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Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

0 posted 2002-10-27 09:08 PM

Miracle
A Tanka
By Paul Wilson

Wishing on a star
Hoping for a miracle
Weeping for lost love
Embrace freedom we have found
Tears of joy now in my heart

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

1 posted 2002-10-27 10:06 PM

A tanka of Love
Miracle of Miracles
Puts joy in all hearts
A great healing for life's pain
Sorrow heals and love remains.

Beautiful tanka, Paul!

Shenachie

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

2 posted 2002-10-27 10:46 PM

Bridget~ Thank you for the lovely Tanka reply.This is my first try at Tanka so if anyone wants to help I would appreciate it...Paul

Tammy Blessing
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

3 posted 2002-10-28 09:50 PM

Pretty awesome for a first try Paul! I really don't see that you need too much help. Just wanted to let you know I loved this October offering.
Tammy

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

4 posted 2002-10-28 10:40 PM

Tammy~ Thank you for reading and your kind reply. Looking forward to the Nov. assignment...Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (10-28-2002 10:41 PM).]

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2002-11-11 06:42 PM

Expect miracles
They happen every day
When we aren't looking

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

6 posted 2002-11-17 07:53 PM

Nan~ Thank you for your kind words.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2002-11-17 10:14 PM

WOW! Great job!! I am so impressed.

Huggles, Marti

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2002-11-17 10:22 PM

This is a wonderful tanka. Your did a wonderful job.

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

9 posted 2002-11-18 01:04 AM

Marti~ For you to be impressed I am impressed
Thanks for the kind words...Paul

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

10 posted 2002-11-18 01:05 AM

Sue~ Thank you so much for the sweet words.
I am trying to get better at these things...Paul

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