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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan ![]() |
Lyra copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
I'm reluctant to speak in cliches but you have painted a beautifully vivid picture here. Thanks for sharing. Pete |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
You are so right!! Autumn is a wonderful time of year and you too have painted a beautiful "portrait" with your lovely words describing it. BTW--I kinda like free verse too!! Keep writing! Peace,love, and happiness Tammy |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Lyra, This seems so different for you and I had to read it twice. It's really, really good and paints a picture of what is so special about September. '...with visions of little witches on broomsticks...' such a great line! And so reminds me of myself. ;-) Again, you and David have a really special time in FL and my prayers for a safe trip. Now go pack....Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much Pete... I think its okay to speak in cliches... Cliches become cliches because they sound so good that everyone starts saying them... and then suddenly no one wants to say them anymore because everyone else says them... aren't human beings weird? Thanks so much for liking my poem... ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Tammy... I actually just started writing free verse recently... probably 3 or 4 months ago. I had always written in rhyme, but I find that I can fit so much more imagery into a free verse poem, because I don't have to worry about the words rhyming. You keep writing too! ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Marti... Did you really think this was so different for me? I wonder why... I've been writing free verse on and off now for about 4 months... Now... How about I will pack tomorrow! ![]() Lyra |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
September is the very best time of the year here on Cape Cod - The weather is perfect - The air is crisp - The ocean is lovely.. I wish I could keep this month all year - especially the way you've painted it here, dear Lyra - Time to gather nuts for the winter now... ![]() |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Nan... I guess I'm going to have to gather some of them in Florida, but thats okay... they probably have some exotic ones which fall off the palm trees. I'll save those for a gourmet treat of remembrance... ![]() Lyra |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Lyra-- You are gifted in all the poetry forms and do free verse so well. It's such a pleasure to read your poems. Hope that you are enjoying the trip to Florida. Shenachie |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Dear ~Lyra~ So a nice poem Me be wanting the words I will say I haven't see Titia "but she fone me. Saterday I go to her for dinner and she will tell me all the storys. ![]() [This message has been edited by Muys (10-02-2002 04:37 PM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
"As the wind breathes the tart scent of riping apples" Yes, I can smell this. How lovely the scent, how lovely the write. Thank you. Now all I want is a hot apple pie with vanilla ice cream. It's l:18 am and that is what I will probably dream about! SG ![]() |
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