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Working Overtime ( My First Sestina ) |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States ![]() |
Working Overtime By Paul Wilson If I only knew how hard it would be To get these words right To some it’s easy as one, two, three For others it may take all night My mind is working overtime A thousand words a minute Second by second we count each minute This challenge won’t let me be A challenge worth this overtime Just to get it right I may work till three Or I may work all night How much coffee I will drink this night To go along with this excedrine minute I lost count maybe the pots number three A masterpiece I want this to be By gosh I believe I’m getting it right The caffeine I drank is working overtime I can’t remember when I had so much fun working overtime This sestina I will finish this night Nan will be the judge if it’s wrong or right After this she to may have an excedrine minute After this one another from me there may never be Well maybe two or three Still trying to get it right as the clock strikes three What reward will I get for these hours of overtime These words in my mind won’t let me be All I have now is a sleepless night Hold on a little longer just another minute Please God help me get it right My mind is wandering this can’t be right Just a final Tercet lines one two and three This challenge will be met before the final minute My reward is near for all my overtime Maybe I will be able to sleep after all this night If all these words will let me be I think I got it right working overtime The pots of coffee were three I drank this night With not a minute to spare this sestina I will let be |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hi Paul! You are doing a rapid catch up on the assignments since you entered the class. This poem sounded a lot like my own sestina attempt. Enjoyed the read! Shenachie |
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