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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Challenges By Paul Wilson The mountains we must climb The mountains we must climb Not sure of what we will find Not sure of what we will find We must find the mountains Not sure of what we will climb Always focused on the challenges in our mind Always focused on the challenges in our mind As we travel through time As we travel through time Through time in our mind as we travel Always focused on the challenges The goals we set soon will be met The goals we set soon will be met The challenges of life not over yet The challenges of life not over yet The goals of life we set Soon the challenges not over yet, will be met The challenges in our life we must find Always focused as we travel through time Soon on the mountains we will climb The goals will be met Not sure of what we set Challenges of the mind not over yet |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Paul, welcome to class, it's a fun place to be. I think you wrote a good paradelle. I haven't done one yet, due to lack of time. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Titia... Thank you for the welcome. You know how new students always feel when they first walk into the class room. Everyone is looking at them. Makes you want to run and hide, till you find a friendly face in the crowd and a new friendship is started. Thanks Again... Paul |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Paul-- Welcome to our new classmate. I truly enjoyed your paradelle. I found this form very difficult and it appears that it was no big hill for You. Enjoyed your theme and your thoughts on the subject. I've really enjoyed the class and for all my complaining, I am getting a lot out of Miss Nan's material. In six months time, I've learned poetry forms that I had never encountered before and I really enjoy the class participation. Hope that you enjoy it as much as I do. Shenachie [This message has been edited by Bridget Shenachie (08-06-2002 11:16 PM).] |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bridget... Thanks for the kind words & welcome. I'm like you, all of this is new to me, all I've ever done was write whatever came to mind with no set meter or anything. I'm still trying to figure all of this out, so I appreciate any help you might have to offer. Thanks Again... Paul |
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