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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2002-05-17 11:31 PM


Although the poem itself isn't funny, I thought I put it here anyway, because while the internet connects our souls, we often are laughing our heads off


sometimes, quite unexpected, feelings connect on the internet
you read a line or verse and you know, two souls have met
strange is it not, not knowing the person behind
you simply feel connected as wires twined
some relationships will be build
in a total abstract world
minds unfurled
as of now
you read
mine
ah
ha
thine
I've read
just did now
minds unfurled
in this beautiful world
a relationship slowly build
connected to you as a wire twined
yet I'm unknown to the one standing behind
you've read my line, my verse and I think we just met
and quite unexpected our feelings did connect on the internet




A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2002-05-18 02:07 PM


Funny or not - I like this self reflective palindromatic piece...

Justin Genius
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since 2001-04-02
Posts 85

2 posted 2002-05-19 02:07 PM


I'd say all the fun is in the shape and a good poem too! Well done Miss Titia.
Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
3 posted 2002-05-21 01:20 AM


Titia,

I enjoyed this poem and just want you to know that you are one of the best internet connections in addition to a lot of other 'bests'.  Thanks for sharing this.

Shenachie

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
4 posted 2002-05-23 12:38 PM


Thank you teach Nan, maybe I'll think of something funny before May ends

Justin G, nice to see you here in class, thanks

Shenachie, you're connecting quite well yourself if I may say so

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA
5 posted 2002-05-28 05:47 PM


Ain't that internet thing great? And it's even better because of all the great friends we have here.  Thanks Titia. Made me smile a lot.

Pete

Muys
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since 2002-04-06
Posts 389
The Netherlands
6 posted 2002-05-30 06:53 AM


I know my daughter Titia
But some times I think-----
"do I realy now here?

Mamma Muys


[This message has been edited by Muys (05-30-2002 06:56 AM).]

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