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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Ok, for some reason I can't seem to write anything this month. These have all been posted in CA a year or so ago but triolets are so much fun to write as well as read that I wanted to share here anyway. I hope the subject matter makes sense. Nan, if this isn't appropriate then just feel free to delete them. Curvature From point to bounds beyond imagination, Our universe expands, or so they say; A subject due our somber contemplation, From point to bounds beyond imagination. But if sufficient matter's in creation It surely all comes crashing back one day From point to bounds beyond imagination. Our universe expands, or so they say. Relativity If I travel quickly and return With haste to where I started long ago, What time will pass and what lies there to learn … If I travel quickly and return? At lightning speed, I think my mind does yearn To comprehend the facts I cannot know, If I travel quickly and return With haste to where I started long ago. Observation While riding on a train, near speed of light, This paradox at once became apparent: A flash of light beside my rails of flight (While riding on a train near speed of light) Spread either way as quickly as it might, As if the speed of light were law inherent. While riding on a train, near speed of light This paradox at once became apparent. Right Triangle The learned Greek, Pythagoras, declared This basic rule of plane geometry: The length of its hypotenuse, when squared (The learned Greek, Pythagoras, declared) To sum of squares of other sides compared, That absolutely equal they would be. The learned Greek, Pythagoras, declared This basic rule of plane geometry. See, just reposting these helped break my writer's block so this is a new one. Maybe it will butter up the teacher so that she won't delete the others. Another Apple Another apple for our teacher, Nan, Who always does so much to show us how. Today I know of nothing nicer than Another apple for our teacher, Nan, For making me exert all that I can And learn to write with better skill. So now Another apple for our teacher, Nan, Who always does so much to show us how. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
They may be old, they're new to me... please Nan... delete them! They're too darned good! (Even the new one you weren't supposed to write... hmm does that make you a paradox too? ![]() |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks so much Munda. You are always too kind ![]() Pete |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well, they sure look good to me. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
They're great, I like them!!! Teach Nan must have an applebelly by now LOL Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Apple cobbler, Apple pie, Apple a la mode, Applebee's... Old or new - Your work is always a treat... I'm smiling.. ![]() |
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