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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2003-03-22 11:07 AM


Stairways
They lead us not
Always up from point"a"
In some cases their ennui
Reveal to us the value of each floor
Were we aware of what we saw
All things point back to"a"
You'll find each way
Stairways



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-03-22 09:33 PM




~Doctor
You are so good
at writing these ditties
Perhaps a shingle is in store
to hang upon this poetic class door
Now if the teacher wants us to
we'll clean an eraser
or maybe two
Doctor~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
2 posted 2003-03-23 09:06 AM


Marge,
Many thanks for your poetic reply. After my false start, I've found this to be a fascinating format. Eraser cleaning it is,
I can smell the chalk already.
Doc

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
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Kansas USA
3 posted 2003-03-25 12:03 PM


Ah, this is what I miss by taking the elevator to get from point A to point B. Sometimes my elevator just doesn't go all the way up.  I really need to look around and pay more attention.  Great write, terrific imagery.

Shenachie

[This message has been edited by Bridget Shenachie (03-25-2003 12:06 AM).]

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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4 posted 2003-03-28 09:21 AM


Stairways
From this classroom
Lead you to Reflections
Where you submit your poetry
"Who in the World Put Such thoughts in Your Head"
For "Reflections" publication
So go to the office
For submissions
Stairways

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA
5 posted 2003-03-28 04:53 PM


Nan,
Thanks. The bumbling, stumbling "Moose"
has already corrected his slight error,
and I am really having some fun with this
months' assignment. Time is running out, and I have four or five more of these I haven't posted yet. I am still waiting to see if anyone sees what I do. But then again , I'm a moose, not a monkey.
Doc

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
6 posted 2003-03-30 11:29 PM


This is really cool and thought provoking!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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