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Triolets - My View...

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

0 posted 2002-02-21 06:53 PM

I surely stand open for correction
But, I found Triolets are quite fun
I thought these had 'simple to follow' direction
I surely stand open for correction
Sonnets, I fumbled to get anywhere near perfection
Da-dums and rhyming just seemed to be on the run
I surely stand open for correction
But, I found Triolets are quite fun.

Inspired by 'Nan's Triolet' by Sharon...but, dears, I mean it when I say I stand open for correction, so please go ahead & tell me...

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-02-23 08:48 AM

Amigo...this is charming, and quite open! LOL...I must try another, as they are not easy, and I shall stand with you on these challenges...

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2002-02-23 10:16 AM

Amigo, you're rocking, although I had some trouble with the meter (it doesn't read easily) I think this is a very nice triolet.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2002-02-24 01:32 PM

Well, if we're not going to make Sunshine conform to meter, we certainly can't make amigo do it... Fair is Fair, after all... This works, amigo...

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

4 posted 2002-02-25 11:06 AM

Thank you - Karilea, Titia and Nan for your words here....now, tell me what is meter & how & where do you get it?...lost & needs help...

Sunshine

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5 posted 2002-02-25 08:17 PM

After you give amigo some direction on meter, point me the right way and I'll join him on the walk...

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2002-02-26 08:07 AM

da-DUM!!

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