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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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Am I a fool to want it all, the love, the happiness, the laughter. But life just seems a bouncing ball, am I a fool to want it all. When I fly high I'll take my fall and lick my wounds right after. Am I a fool to want it all, the love, the happiness, the laughter A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Oh no you surely are no fool to want it all! I know I'd like to.  Lovely Triolet Titia.Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou... |
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Prairie Inkwells Junior Member
since 2002-02-04
Posts 13Kansas |
Titia-- You've captured my thoughts in this one--"Am I a fool to want it all?"--it's a great question. I would like to respond with my answer--We're fools not to follow our dreams. I hope that you get everything you want! Shenachie |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
You really are getting the hang of this aren't you. Great subject and followed the form spot on. I liked your unstressed rhymes (laughter/after). So often these are not done properly but yours are perfect. Thanks, Pete |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Not a fool at all... I wish it all for you as well.. Nice second one..  |
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