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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 1999-10-28 10:07 AM


It was such a sweet caress
on that weary dreary day
longing for my bonnie lass
solemn grief ate me away

On that weary dreary day
Death came passing by my door
solemn grief ate me away
heartache mine forevermore

Death came passing by my door
looking at my soppy eyes
heartache mine forever more
bonnie lass she just had died

looking at my soppy eyes
feeling sorry in a way
bonnie lass she just had died
said "this is your lucky day"

feeling sorry in a way
her kiss cold yet sweet to me
said "this is your lucky day"
your sweet bonnie lass you’ll see

her kiss cold yet sweet to me
longing for my bonnie lass
your sweet bonnie lass you’ll see
it was such a sweet caress



[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 10-28-1999).]

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-10-29 10:02 AM


Well done Munda
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