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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Eider puffs of purest white suspend my thoughts to whirl away upon the the slightest breath of wind there-in they loop, and slip, and sway. The weight-less fluff of dreams, surreal does weave its' charm into this flight as wisps of moisture laden air condense and swirl before my sight. The crisp night air sweeps me aloft, a mote which rides a zephyr steed. From here, now shed of earthly care, my message paints the sky to read... Be well all of my Passions' friends the snow-flakes of my thanks abound. Best wishes for your holidays, you've helped me reach this place I've found. Doc |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh Doc, this is a beautiful poem. I don't know if I can do my homework, for I still don't know exactly what I have to write, can't open the links to see. Well I've to dig deeper I guess, who knows Love yours though and sweet happy holydays to you too A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very, very, kewl, Doc... You always do a magnificent job... You've used some exceptional personification... I went back to read your poem again to pull out the lines that are personified... and I can't - They ALL are... Simply awesome, my Doc friend... Happy Holidays to you...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Doctor moose, Your flying way over my head. My wish would be to some day write like this This is stunning Could you give me a hand up there? Liz |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Titia, Thanks I'm sure you'll come up with something ( you always do ) Merry Christmas Doc Nan, Thanks "teach", So that's what it's called ? I can't say that occured to me when I wrote this. It just seemed to be a nice way to say thanks to everyone for being so helpful. Doc Elizabeth, Thank you, I don't know how many times I've read your words and thought that very same thing. It would hardly seem to me that you would need a hand, but by all means, c'mon up and enjoy the view. Merry Christmas. Doc |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Thank you for the lift, Doc. I haven't read each and every single poem of yours, but maybe I should because I've enjoyed all the ones I have read. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Elizabeth, Thank you. There is so much good poetry on this site it becomes impossible to read and reply to all of it. I've just got to settle for what time allows, but I do try to at the very least answer when someone replys to something I've written. Happy New Year . Doc |
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