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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 A  star in shinebrings a glowto all the heartsin the know of lovefilled with the kind andloving thought - treasurethat cannot be bought withany amount of money on earthcelebrate His Holy birth~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-13-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You are amazing.... Marge, my friend... This is perfect! Regards, Sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep! Good stuff here! I took my response from Nan's thread and posted it in open, for anyone who wants to look...and you might, LOL, as I did some TWEAKING.... "His Star, His Cradle" and thanks for letting me tack that little comment on here, Margie Girl! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
The Christmas spirit is shining through your words and inspiring you to write such wonderful masterpieces. I love it!!! I love it!!! **big hugs** [img]http://www.plauder-smilies.de/xmas/glocke.gif[/img] [img]http://www.plauder-smilies.de/xmas/wbaum.gif[/img] Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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misscris Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 27Leawood, KS, USA |
Amen! It is so easy to lose sight of what really matters, especially in the increasingly commercialized world we live in. misscris <>< |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
So true sweet Marge  TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Marge - This is indeed wonderful - I absolutely love it...  For those of us who don't seem to get the imagery thing... Let's use Marge's poem as an example - Because Doc's is one big ole personification... This poem has a fantastic visual presentation...We've come to expect that of you, of course, Marge.. The 'tree' presentation makes the poem an 'extended metaphor'... The entire poem represents something other than its obvious words. Other than that, Marge has also used some great personification here. Stars cannot literally 'bring a glow to a heart'... She's given the star a life of its own... Hearts cannot literally be filled with love.. more personification.. Making sense, Titia?.. Need any more help? |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Your words have brought a smile to my face, Marge......  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Teacher ... You have set me to *smiling* ... The glow of my *smile* EXTENDS all the way to my METAPHOR ... HONEST INJUN ~~~~~~>  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marge, (nodding in agreement)Yep, nice work here. Thought I had already replied to this( glad I checked back). Doc |
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