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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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What shall we do? Let's keep it simple - and perhaps holiday oriented? |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As one of the new kids on the block, do I get to make a suggestion? I do? Any kind of poem with a graphic flair.... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
graphic... meaning a lot of imagery!!! if so, please count me in... so imagery and simplistically holiday like... wow!!! any other rules?  regards, sudhir |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
okay here is something ---------------------- ever wondered how it would appear if you threw an egg up the ceiling? you think I am crazy well, you may because you are entitled to own your thinking license a maturity certificate of sense but, look at the sky now, in this mid-winter month and tell me what you see well, I can tell you exactly what I see I see clouds mixed with blue patches much like the ceiling in my thoughts darkening with cobwebs of memories and blue in the spirit of loneliness and I see the sun which seems to be holding back its heat, unwilling to share its warmth almost as cold hearted as the chandelier above my head decorated with impatient light bulbs as if waiting to go dead. then I think again, of an egg thrown into the non-stick sky! you think I am crazy of course, you do, you may but then, remember this before you make your judgement -- holidays, particularly alone can do stranger things to you .... let me know if you absolutely loathed it... but, maybe you liked it... regards, sudhir |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL - Graphical Imagery it is... Good plan  ... Thankya Sudhir... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
my pleasure, my friend... here is another... If gloom begins to dwell, look up to the sky and hang on to the bright clouds of hope and develop fresh waves of belief to paint your ship's sails with huge smiles [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Sudhir that's a nice image...don't know if I am able to make art like this....but well it's worth to try it out. Charisma |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot, charisma... I am waiting for others to start... there are some huge stars here who do incredible things at mixing graphics of the way the poems look, the way they read, and at the same time 'showing' the scenes around the poem equally adeptly Regards to all, Sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, based on Sudhir's own words... A Star Came to all from the heavens, that we Might behold His Love In all And thus His love Became His gift To have to hold to cherish and to share with all a reminder that he died for our sins that we may forever live. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, I've got to find my December sky pen. Don't know where I put it. But I'll find it. Might be in January's batch My poem will be posted, at some point Thanks, Sudhir |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Yup,Sudhir, A most excellent idea ( I see light bulbs going on all over the place !) |
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