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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Rain In Fall ~*Marge Tindal*~ Patter does the rain in fall Pittered splatter of liquid matter Slapping concrete Puddling~ Puddling~ Plip~ Plop~ Plippity~ Plop~ Plop~ Ballerina's pirouette wet~ wet~ Tutu twirling Raindrops swirling Patter does the rain in fall ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I love it - especially the quote: Right ONomatopoeiAlliterationing  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
What can I say other than WOWOWOWOWOWOW Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Like it a lot Marge....awesome rainy piece Charisma  |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge,! This is awesome...I could hear the rain falling all the way over here! I need some of that! Cindi |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey, you know what? It's raining here right now, and it sounds just like your poem!! Good one Marge If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This sounds like it reads. Great write Marge! |
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