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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az 
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Belly giggles, tummy jiggles laughter all around Children's smile of sunshine smacking kisses cheeks abound Pitter patter, short feet scatter running to and fro Peeking here and booing there it's really quite a show Bong bong, we have a song clanking out in tune Pots and pans the instruments toot toot a trumpet too? Giggles, smiles, a hundred miles short feet surely go Smack, a kiss from time to time the tune of love ya know? Cpalmer God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears Cpalmer |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Great poem, makes me smile  lyl |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cindi~ Delightful ... and I LOVE the clang of the pots and pans symphony~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Kirk, Thank you! You'll have to experience it sometime! LYL Cindi Marge, I think I've pretty much gone deaf from the sound or just learned to tune it out...but it is so fun to watch them! Hugs Cindi |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Such a delightful happy write Cindi Mine are grown up now, but I can still hear that sound. Great onowhatsthatsound  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
cpalmer, Can't beat that " Pots and Pans " orchestra with a stick ( unless you're playing in it ) Fun read . Doc |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh tres chic! |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I remember those "kitchen band" days with my own children. Great noises in your poetry bring it all back! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Even though my kids are 12 and 15 now, when "La Bamba" starts playing the kitchen orchestra is there again. LOL Love this poem! I really do. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, you've really got this onamatawhatever thing going!!! The right words and a story too. I guess you're gonna get the gold star in this class. I'm going back in the corner to smoke with the boys!!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Titia, Thanks! I'm learning to cherish these times for the memories will be all that is left soon! Hugs Cindi Dr Moose, I'll stick with the singing part...the kids seem to have the rest under control all by themselves! Thanks Hugs Cindi Wayoutwalt, Okay? Cindi Romy, So glad I could bring it back to you...come to my house and you can hear it for yourself! LOL Thanks Hugs Cindi Munda, "La Bamba" one of my favorites! The band never ends I'm sure! At 3 and 5 the band has just begun! LOL Thanks Hugs Cindi Tracey, Going in the corner to smoke with the boys? aren't you even gonna try it? Oh man! I can smell the smoke from over here! Gold star huh? I'm waiting to see what Miss Nanners thinks! thanks for the boost of confidence! Hugs Cindi |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
great sounds inhere.....it made me smile love it!!Charisma |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Cindi - This is really very cute - I love it when I read a poem that makes me smile - and you had me from the first line on this one.. Very KEWL..  |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Charisma, Thank you! Cindi Nan, Thank you...i love making the teacher smile! Hugs Cindi |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
i love this .It has great sounds and flow when you read it out loud . Nothing beats a kitchen band.  Suzanne |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Gee, I haven't had much time to spend with the spitball and watergun crowd in the workshop lately but I do peek in the window from time to time. Then this morning I stuck my head in the door and found this absolute jewel. I loved it. Thanks for writing Cindi. And thanks for bumping it back up Suzanne. I missed it the first time around. Pete BTW Tracey, what are you and the guys smoking over there? |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Suzanne, Thanks alot! The kitchen band is priceless I can say that! Cindi Pete, Glad you liked it! where have you been? Haven't seen you before here...don't worry about Tracey and the gang smokin over there! They're not as fun as me! LOL Cindi |
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