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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-10-11 08:07 AM


Bubble Bath

Into the tub of a bubbly brew
Of strawberry beads in a hot calming stew
Warming and soothing this smooth oozing broth
Topped with a tingling tickling froth

Into the spongy white billows I slip
To savor the balm of a pillowy dip
Soapy and sudsy and slippery soft
Luscious and plush is the bubbly loft

Wrapped in caresses of fluffy light foam
Lathered in spume of a puffy white dome
Buoyant and cushiony tingle and tang
Light as soufflé with the puff of meringue

Now light up a candle and soak to the core
And please don’t anyone knock on the door

Elizabeth Santos


© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 2001-10-11 12:36 PM


Wow Liz, now I want a bubble bath too!  
Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-10-11 02:44 PM


Bubblebath uhhhhh with strawberrries???

I'M COMMING IN!!!!

Titia

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Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2001-10-11 03:59 PM


Bubbles with strawberry fragrance, not real strawberries. Let's make that clear
Just lots and lots of bubbles
Your welcome to come over and try it
Thanks
Liz

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4 posted 2001-10-12 06:23 AM


bubbles with strawberry fragrance
as I will take any change
to make next bubble bath mine
strawberry fragrance so delightful fine
splashes, washes against my skin
please me with strawberry sin.


Charisma

Romy
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5 posted 2001-10-12 11:12 AM


Taking a bath never sounded so delicious!
Beautiful poem!

Nan
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6 posted 2001-10-15 07:18 AM


Liz has a REALLY great tub too... nice & deep... turn on the jet streams... sounds heavenly, doesn't it??..
Tracey
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7 posted 2001-10-17 10:51 PM


I want one of these bubble baths too. Sounds way cool (or should I say nice and warm). Neat onamatathingy

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Duncan
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8 posted 2001-10-18 12:00 PM


Pass on the bubble bath but the stew sounded great.  Good job on the ono...
wayoutwalt
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9 posted 2001-10-21 03:49 AM


you are so talented i am in awe yuh
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