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Duncan
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0 posted 2001-10-12 12:28 PM




Sounds like

I zoned into the wrong class
too fast
before considering my lack
of even minimal poetic education

Big words scare me
and this one looms
like a brilliant golf umbrella
covering a bit too much
of the fading sun

Perhaps, I’ll stop back
next season
enlightened


© Copyright 2001 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-12 12:54 PM


Like your Onalargewordpoem. I don't get it too, as lack of words tease me too, but I do love to learn and play around.  

Charisma

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-10-12 07:39 PM


You don't give up now Dundun, first class is always hard to do and this one specially.

IT IS NOT THE END OF OCTOBER YET!!!

So...take thy diddely doodely pen to hand
Write the dizzeling dazzeling words your muze will send
Then a onomayouneverknow will see the light
And you'll live happily ever after, yes you might


Titia  

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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3 posted 2001-10-13 04:30 AM


Awwwwwww, come on Duncan~
Ya' just gotta stay ... you're just tooooo cool to be a quitter~

We'll give you 'ups' in the merry-go-round line~
and when teacher isn't looking we like to neck on the playground~  But don't tell ~

TEACHER .. make him stay ! !

His poem is really

Duncan ... you don't think the teacher likes it if we know everything ... do you ?
Well ... she doesn't ... she LIKES to TEACH ~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2001-10-13 09:25 AM


Duncan ,
Yes , by all means , do stick around . I'm hopelessly outnumbered here , and you know what bullies girls can be when they're in the majority . I used to be able to count on Allan for a little moral support , but I haven't seen him around lately . We sure could use a couple more guys around , so I hope you'll reconsider .
Doc

Munda
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5 posted 2001-10-14 09:37 AM


Oh no! Don't you dare leaving! I'd be the only one left who hasn't got a clue what the heck she's writing! Believe me... it may look different but honestly... IhavenoideawhattheheckI'mdoing!
Nan
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6 posted 2001-10-15 07:30 AM


Did somebody remember to lock the door so Duncan can't get out?  Umm... Duncan - watch out for the girls on the playground - They're pretty tricky and they have a tendency to pick on the guys...

Did you bring an apple, btw?

Duncan
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7 posted 2001-10-15 01:06 PM


Thanks all.  Nan, your apple is on your desk.
Maybe next month we could do 'poetry for dummies'.  There I will shine.  
Ahhh...does anyone know what's wrong with this door?  I think it's stuck or something and I have to go...real bad.

Nan
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8 posted 2001-10-15 02:35 PM


The boys' room is downstairs, Duncan...


wayoutwalt
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9 posted 2001-10-21 03:50 AM


hehhe just keep at it
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