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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-10-08 09:36 PM



Blustery gusts of the wintry wind
Billowing chills in a sprintering spin
Blowing and nipping at bright golden trees
Bitter the splintering easterly breeze

Whisked by the cold whistling whispers of air
Lifting the lush autumn leaves everywhere
Swirling them round in a circling wisp
Til they fall in a carpet made crunchy and crisp

Auntum is lovely, but brings on the cold
And ice chilling blizzards as winter unfolds
And lays down a white icy blanket if snow
That crackles and crunches wherever you go

E;lizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom
1 posted 2001-10-08 09:57 PM


Hey, now what are the rest of us going to use?????

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2001-10-09 07:50 AM


Arthur,
How about glittering, twinkling stars?
or hot sizzling sands?
Or ghostly grizzly ghouls?
Liz

Apachecat906
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3 posted 2001-10-09 08:54 AM


BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2001-10-09 02:32 PM


Oh I never realized what a "wise"decision I made when I said this class would be too much for a foreigner. LOL
Great write Liz!

Charisma
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5 posted 2001-10-09 04:10 PM


I agree with you Munda, way to much for a foreigner....I guess....*lol*

but this one is way to go  

Charisma

Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-10-09 05:03 PM


You wrote a beautiful onomatlforgottherest verse here. Like it very much.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Romy
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7 posted 2001-10-09 05:33 PM


Yes, beautiful it is! Nice job.
cpalmer
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Phoenix, Az
8 posted 2001-10-09 07:59 PM


I love this...not sure I can match up to it though!  Lizzy! can you tutor me? LOL
Cindi

Dr.Moose1
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9 posted 2001-10-09 08:23 PM


Elizabeth ,
Far be it from me
to again call you " E "
Those times came and went
this is most " Ex " cellent !

So where does that leave
one who would so bereave ,
the loss of such fun ,
can it be new , begun ?
Doc

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-10-09 11:02 PM


LizzieLady~
This just swoops my hat off~
You da' gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
11 posted 2001-10-10 09:20 AM


Tank you all for your comments
Nobody said these things had to be in English. If I knew Dutch, I would write one that gurgles and gushes with gobs of glottal
grit glazed in global glitter. But I'm embarssed to say, I don't know one word of Dutch, but I would still enjoy reading it.
Thank you, girls, for the remarks, Now go write your poem. It will be great!

Dr. Moose,
Mine is frigid, yours is hot
Yours has got what mine has not
Mine makes chills go up your spine
Yours does other things to mine
Thanks for the comments
L.

Margie, Please don't blow away, girl.
WE need you here.
Thanks, dear
Liz

Nan
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12 posted 2001-10-10 09:48 AM


So we have to call you EX now?
All righty then - we can find lots of EXpletives for you... all EXceptional ones...

wayoutwalt
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13 posted 2001-10-21 03:57 AM


wish icould get in that head o yuhs o yuh
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