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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Blustery gusts of the wintry wind Billowing chills in a sprintering spin Blowing and nipping at bright golden trees Bitter the splintering easterly breeze Whisked by the cold whistling whispers of air Lifting the lush autumn leaves everywhere Swirling them round in a circling wisp Til they fall in a carpet made crunchy and crisp Auntum is lovely, but brings on the cold And ice chilling blizzards as winter unfolds And lays down a white icy blanket if snow That crackles and crunches wherever you go E;lizabeth Santos |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Hey, now what are the rest of us going to use????? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Arthur, How about glittering, twinkling stars? or hot sizzling sands? Or ghostly grizzly ghouls? Liz |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh I never realized what a "wise"decision I made when I said this class would be too much for a foreigner. LOL Great write Liz! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I agree with you Munda, way to much for a foreigner....I guess....*lol* but this one is way to go  Charisma |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You wrote a beautiful onomatlforgottherest verse here. Like it very much. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Yes, beautiful it is! Nice job. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I love this...not sure I can match up to it though! Lizzy! can you tutor me? LOL Cindi |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Elizabeth , Far be it from me to again call you " E " Those times came and went this is most " Ex " cellent ! So where does that leave one who would so bereave , the loss of such fun , can it be new , begun ? Doc |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LizzieLady~ This just swoops my hat off~ You da' gal~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Tank you all for your comments Nobody said these things had to be in English. If I knew Dutch, I would write one that gurgles and gushes with gobs of glottal grit glazed in global glitter. But I'm embarssed to say, I don't know one word of Dutch, but I would still enjoy reading it. Thank you, girls, for the remarks, Now go write your poem. It will be great! Dr. Moose, Mine is frigid, yours is hot Yours has got what mine has not Mine makes chills go up your spine Yours does other things to mine Thanks for the comments L. Margie, Please don't blow away, girl. WE need you here. Thanks, dear Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So we have to call you EX now? All righty then - we can find lots of EXpletives for you... all EXceptional ones...  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wish icould get in that head o yuhs o yuh |
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