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Whatsamattah? Pee Yew! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) ![]() |
Ouch! buzzing stungmebee Niggling as I mumble free Oozing, popping, moan and hiss Murmur, thudding, croak like this Ah, the rattlesnake did lisp To be sizzled cooked to crisp Oh he shimmied up last week Pow! Made girlfriend screech, go eek. Ow! The squish of pus and goo Every plop and ew P. U. I’m babbling with a great kaboom All is bleak: vroom and zoom! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW WOW Way out Way out WALT Well that's the only thing I came up with ![]() Super Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
" stungmebees " & speech impaired rattlesnakes . Welcome to Walts' World ( gotta love it !) Doc |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I love it! Great onomatopoetic stungmebee acrostic! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ When I get up off the floor - I will say this is so YOU ~ ![]() An acrostic to boot~ TooooooooooFarrrrrrrrrrOutttttttttt~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I was laughing so hard I fell off my chair! Love it love it love it!!! Cindi |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Yeek! Onomatopoeia AND Acrostic? Wowsa! |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hehe. I never came to this part of pips 'till today. LOL. And here I used to say "On a mat I pee, yuh!" That's my doggie routine. Now you know, I'm a looney tune. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Cool. I think you're gonna get a gold star too. I'm just gonna go to the back of the class til I get this figured out!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well, I'm impressed. One of these yokoono things and an acrostic. Damn! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
waytogooutwalty... |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* this is soooooooooo wayoutyou ![]() ![]() Charisma |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Did I mention I am much obliged for all your replies o yuh |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THis is the height of onomagoo. You win the prize for poetic license and poetic humor. Great job Liz |
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