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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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MY fINAL ROPHALIC Late August afternoon Still trying rophalics brain working constantly sweat dripping cheekes reddish ablushing crushing peanutshells too many cigarettes dear teacher Nanniness counting syllables poor Dutchie warm outside nice sunny afternoon I'm crazy now trying rophalic September new challenge LOL  A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Titia , A fine picture you have drawn here . I can almost see you crouched over your desk , ashtray over-flowing , pencil chewed to a nub , gazing out the window , wondering what insanity you've gotten yourself into that prevents you from being out in the sun . Been there myself . Good work . Doc |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
hey, very very nice work Titia  I enjoyed this one a great deal.Like the Doc I was impressed with the imagery and tone, I'm grinning. Maybe try some painkillers to get you through until our next assignment. Let's just hope it's not something like double acrostics...  People call me a madman, but I'm not mad at anyone. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ This is WONDERFUL ! You got a grip on the form and the imagery is outstanding~  Now ... go to the playground ! School's out for the weekend ! ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dear Doc, you've been there too uhhhh, so you know.... Allan, double acrostic???? oh dear oh dear Marge, followed your advice, thank God it's weekend Thank you all sweeties. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Reading over my final here Saw I made this faulth so queer Wrote Rophalic instead of Rhopalic Must be the heat that gave me this tic Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
OK - So Titia's lost her marbles..  |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
You go girl! It's fun when we lose our marbles!!! Cindi |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahhhh, but I lost mine many years ago already Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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