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cpalmer
Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

0 posted 2001-08-22 04:47 PM


Where's the action-rhopalic

Where's
the Action
in workshop poeteers?
Have
we gotten
a little overwhelmed?
Or
just slowing
down, pacing poetry
I'm
a little
bored today everyone
Need
some action
in workshop beggingly
I
plead nicely
dear gracious multitude
Let's
give action
to workshop challenges
And
make begone
the boredness tendency
Bring
life within
the workshop assembly
Make action....


Sorry couldn't resist! LOL

Cpalmer August 22, 2001


God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

© Copyright 2001 cpalmer - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502
Winnipeg
1 posted 2001-08-22 07:42 PM


I agree completely.
So many residents,
So little attendance.
Such nonsense.

You eat the brains of an old, wise man.

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2001-08-23 08:36 AM


But sometimes
We really
Need
a
Rest

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2001-08-23 11:09 AM


Cindi~

A dilly
A dollar
A rhopalic scholar
Made her bed
You sleepy-head
Now write another one instead !
Then after you think you're through
There's eraser dusting ...
JUST FOR YOU !

Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

cpalmer
Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
4 posted 2001-08-23 12:56 PM


Allan,
LOL! Well, had to get the ball rolling again!
Cindi


Nan,
But teach aren't we always encouraged to keep thinking?  LOL Just kidding, I know we all need a rest, but I needed something to do...
Cindi

Marge
Okay okay to the chalk board I shall go...I was afraid miss nanners would send me to the corner for trying to be a show off! LOL
Cindi

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
5 posted 2001-09-03 06:07 PM


And I did miss all the fun here  

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Romy
Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
6 posted 2001-09-03 11:51 PM


Sshhh! While Nan is resting I have a few suggestions for the next lesson!

Monorhymes
List Poems
ABC Poems
Anything with lots of hyperbole!

cpalmer
Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
7 posted 2001-09-07 12:35 PM


Titia,
Don't be sad...there's still more to come I'm sure! I see you got a couple out that's cool!
Hugs
Cindi

Romy,
I love your suggestions...Think teach will want to do them after such a long rest...LOL
Thanks
Cindi

Apachecat906
Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217
Michigan, USA
8 posted 2001-09-07 04:30 PM


Hallo Hallo,

If anyone is still looking for something to do, they can feel very free (like an Irishman in a kilt) to read my poem called "Think of Me" in the adult section.  It is my very first poem that was penned from a real emotion and no one is responding to it. It must not be that good, which is why I was hoping for suggestions and comments, positive and negative, from the veterans.  Anyway, I should have put it here but I think its against the rules to repost, so I thought I'd just solicit some attention.
Thanks,
C :'')  


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