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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az 
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wind whisper tenderly a velvet melody while sailing decussate romantically with gentle sensation passionately, emotionally generously show wondrous tremendous exuberant presentation of refined beautiful magnificence that only influence can bestow wind Cpalmer August 11, 2001 |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
*claps* I have no idea what kind of poem that was supposed to be, but I'm in here just to read anywayz. *hugglez* |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Snoog, Thanks for the claps and hugs! this is a wedge verse...you should try one, they are fun! Hugs Cindi |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cindi- It would seem you have a bit of an obsession with the weather! LOL  Another wonderful rhopalic...I like! Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Neato... You began with a gust of wind - built up to a tempest - and worked back down to your original line... I like it.. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky, Yes I do have an obsession with the weather...LOL Especially here in the summer!!! Thanks for reading! Hugs Cindi Nan, Thank you! These are a challenge but I'm having fun with it and learning alot of new words! I guess you could say I am 'broadening my horizon'! LOL Cindi |
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Soul Survivor New Member
since 2001-08-15
Posts 7Canada |
Alrighty, Would you kindly tell me what a wedge poem is? And the guidelines? They sound like they are fun to write as per your poem on wind, and I would love to give it a try. Thanks, Soul Survivor We know what we are, but not what we may be. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
okay, basically what you are trying to do is write a poem that has each line starting with a word, and each word after that will have 1 more syllable than the previous word in that line...read the poem again and count the syllables...enjoy! Thanks for reading I'll be looking for yours soon! Cindi [This message has been edited by cpalmer (edited 08-15-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Cindy, this is WOW, you're good!!!!! Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Great form on this one, cindy Now you can rest til the next assignment Fait accompli! and very well done Liz |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Titia, Thank you! I appreciate the compliment!Cindi Liz, I think I will rest til the next assignment, this one gave me a headache...LOL Although, my muse seems to like these! Thanks Cindi |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cindi~ LOL ! @Vicky~ Glad to see you braved the weather and are enjoying these thingies~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge You are too funny! LOL I am really enjoying these thingies! The challenge is wonderful and really makes me think about what I am doing! Thanks for reading! Hugs Cindi |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
I like the weather too, I enjoyed this poem, made me smile |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Kirksters! Thanks for the support! LYL Cindi |
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