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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2001-08-13 04:22 PM


Flee
quickly
I decree !
Continually
needing alignment's
one nasty assignment
promoting insanity !

Like
penning
palindromes
psychotic'ly !
Legitimately ,
I'm speaking lunacy
expounded progressively !

It's
goofy
man , crazy !
Personally
( feigning compliance
to maintain defiance )
denying complicity .

Not
easy
poetry .
Decidedly
getting squirrely .
Exponentially
increasing 'lectricity !

ZZZZZZZZZAP !!!

© Copyright 2001 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
1 posted 2001-08-14 03:57 PM


What a cool approach! I love this!
great job!  

hugs
Cindi

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2001-08-15 09:31 AM


...and after he mutates the assignment, he always comes back and does it perfectly - What am I gonna do with this silly Moose?..
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
3 posted 2001-08-16 07:19 PM


I think this 'silly' Moose isn't so silly at all  

Titia

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4 posted 2001-08-17 12:30 PM


Me thinks the 'Mooser' was sandbagging~

Cool Mon~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
5 posted 2001-08-17 09:27 PM


cpalmer , Nan , Titia , and Marge ,
Thank you so much for your comments . I am looking to see if anyone is up for the cha
llenge to somehow do one of these with an eight line stanza ,or even an one line that follows the rules and adds up to eight syllables. because of the way the assignment was worded, I have come to believe this is not possible . Help please ! I'm lost in poetic limbo !
Doc

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