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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-08-13 11:08 AM


a little splattering intermittent precipitation anticipatively
will always promulgate immediate immeasurable hyperactivity
with thirty affected subordinates manipulating disorientation
the teacher demonstrates spontaneous ultracreative disorganization

whew!

Liz

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Dr.Moose1
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1 posted 2001-08-13 04:38 PM


Elizabeth ,
Astutely executed , astonishingly articulatory .( and it describes the class to a "t" .)
Doc

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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Phoenix, Az
2 posted 2001-08-14 03:54 PM


AWSOME!!! you did it!! Great job   I'm sure teach will love this  

Hugs
Cindi

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Nan
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3 posted 2001-08-15 09:29 AM


LOL - The teacher needs to attempt to do as well as the rest here...
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-08-16 07:17 PM


WOW



Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2001-08-16 09:06 PM


Thank you everyone
I did it!
But it's not good poetry. I had to give that up for the sake of syllable count
But, I did it! I did it!
Thanks
Liz

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-08-17 12:31 PM


You go, LizzieGirl~
WAHOO !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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