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cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

0 posted 2001-07-31 07:40 PM


Okay here is my attempt at it!!

Clerihew? How 'bout you?

A cleri-here a Cleri-there
There are cleri’s everywhere!
In our thoughts in our minds
In passions forums we do find

Nan has brought this fun tid bit
To class, I’m late, she made me fit!
She brought to us the world of hew
She asks us all for cleri we do

Then there's Marge who sends a message
Says it's okay to join this passage
She's always there to bring new dispute
Her muses, all of them can bring quite a hoot

Vlraynes is in to make a scene
She brings forth wisdom and also her dreams
I look at her in high repute
And give her a nice little AZ solute!

Late with my homework, nothing new
I’ve done a cleri....how 'bout you?

Cpalmer July 31, 2001


© Copyright 2001 cpalmer - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
1 posted 2001-07-31 07:57 PM




I see that you've got the hang of it
and beauties they are I must admit
I'm glad you joined this class with me
then I'm not the only newbie you see

BRAVO!!! you wrote them well

Titia


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

cpalmer
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Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
2 posted 2001-07-31 08:12 PM


Thank you Titia I really tried
It was kinda hard, I wont deny
I appreciate your comment too!
Glad to know Im not the only one new!

Hugs
Cindi

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-08-01 03:56 AM


Cindi~

You 'more' than did it ! !  

Good on you ! !  
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
4 posted 2001-08-01 11:45 AM


Marge,
Thanks....does that mean I pass?  
(big smile!)
Hugs
Cindi

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
5 posted 2001-08-02 01:27 PM


Clerihew is just you stile
I read them with a warming smile
You got the knack, you got the flair
Your clerihews are everywhere

Liz

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
6 posted 2001-08-02 04:40 PM


Hey Liz,
Thank you!  I think I'll write my next one about you?  Sound like a good idea? (laughing)  I'll see what I can come up with so you'll have to look on the open forum to find it!  chao!
Cindi

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
7 posted 2001-08-02 11:30 PM


cpalmer ,
Well done !(this is for you )

C. Palmer is to us it seems
as one within poetic dreams
her course is straight and not obtuse
so say all of us mixed up Moose .

Doc

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
8 posted 2001-08-03 02:11 AM


Hey Doc
This is great! you did real well
You've been studying I can tell
Thanks for the words of art
They're truely from the heart!!!

Thanks so much  
Cindi

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
9 posted 2001-08-03 05:19 PM



cindi-
   Yep...WAY too much time on your hands.LOL
   Great job on these!  

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



cpalmer
Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
10 posted 2001-08-06 01:10 AM


Why thank you Dear Vicky!  You are right...the nights are mine again...LOL
Hugs
Cindi

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