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Nan
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0 posted 2001-05-04 06:42 AM




On Meeting Hemingway

To take a step through times of yore - In search of Hemingway
From Sloppy Joe's a leisure stroll - Duval to Whitehead Street
Each photo speaks of decades fore - Simplicity the way
A tale For Whom the Bell might Toll - Where past and present meet
Of families and homespun time - For Old Man and the Sea
A tropic paradise so grand - Each morn spawned fine redact
There penned much prose 'mongst touch of rhyme - Enscripted brilliantly
From suite to loft, once catwalk spanned - His studio intact
With sixty felines 'bout the grounds - Cats basking in the sun
To Have and Have Not his avow - Now Papa's legacy
The essence of bygone abounds - Cavort till day is done
Though novel words long silenced now - His message holds the Key

It's said that cats live one times nine - This six-toed cat was his
For just one moment he was mine - And that's the way it is!!!



Waft every crest upon your destined sea
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity
Nancy





© Copyright 2001 Nancy Ness - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 2001-05-05 04:30 AM


Oh my goodness! You got out and secretly wrote a superb double poem! Arghhh... *pulling my hair*... Great!... Great!... Great poem Nan!  
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2 posted 2001-05-06 09:04 PM


Nice work Nan!  I'm going to try this very very soon.  
I look forward to attending the class.  
*puts an apple on the teacher's desk*

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
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3 posted 2001-05-06 10:13 PM


Wow Nan.. this was wonderful! You just took this form and kicked it in the butt! Beautiful poem... we all feel a connection to our favorite authors, and you describe it well. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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4 posted 2001-05-08 01:50 AM


Wow, Nan!  This is a very impressive poem!  This is a difficult style to master and you make it look so effortless.  Of course English teachers like Hemingway.
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