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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Moose Hunt There was a Moose who thought he'd jump the queue He walked up front, since he was the Doc new "End of the line!" The Justin Clan did scream "Freelancing Doc disguised... must be a dream All Justins come first with this gooey-stew Crayon King, Lady Red and ONE WHO FLEW End of the line! Now wait 'til ALL are fed Or shall we straitjacket ye strapped in bed?" Now rest assured, 'twas never seen before The Justins pursued Doc with true rancour He ran for life through halls in full gallop Ending here in this class his last clip clop "We've got him! Spank him! No, let's make a hole And stick him through it, so Nan keeps control Let him learn meter and to catch spit ball Looks like that's why he's the face on the wall Munda :* Ok I confess... I had a little help from Nan with the meter... hehe. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Munda, are you musclin' on the Doc, be careful be very careful! Good poem sorta, loved the rhyme and metre, worried about the subject. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
In school they now have hung my face at least was not my a** Munda you did instigate this how nice of you sweet lass On wall my portrait stately hung neuveaux it's style of art one of the masters painted it right from the very start Each one of you I thank for this doggone those spit-balls never miss ! Doc |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
A wild and wacky acrostic. Makes sense to me (I think), but then I belong in the looney bin.  Gene |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Kethry Thank you and LOL don't you worry. I happen to know the Doc from a "white coated" place although I'm not sure he knows. Doc.Moose, it was entirely my pleasure to pull a hoove or two for a change.  Gene, everything I write always makes sense to me. Thanks my friend.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Munda, you know I love this... and I made very minimal suggestions on your meter... When we finally bag that Moose... we can mount him and hang him in front of the classroom - It'll be a grand trophy for sure... |
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