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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
A word of explanation : This was formed from a glossary of words where each was chosen for two purposes :1, they are each palindromic,2, they were selected for theme. I'm still not sure if this really works , but I get an over-all feel of the subject matter , and I hope that carries on through. Doc " Wolf " No wolf step trap part pets was pup On paws I saw now mood snaps ha Wolf speed peels eye spots on radar Oh no guns slag spin swam sore gut Loop deer spot mad swap spat pat pup Flow mood stops part redder was eye Spans pool wolf flow deed deeps now sit Tis won speed deed wolf flow loop snaps Eye saw redder trap spots doom wolf Pup tap taps paws dam tops reed pool Tug eros , maws nips gals snug on ho Radar no stops eye sleep deeps flow Ah spans doom won was I swap no Pup saw step trap part pets flow on |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
OH my I understand this. This is really neat Dr Moose really neat Suzanne |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hey Doc, it's scary that this made sense to me! Or to use an old expression this is so far out it's in! Too much brain twisting I think. If anyone asks me to twist again I think I may have to decline. write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Suzanne , and Kethry , Thanks for the replys , yes it is kind of scary(that's exactly what I thought), almost visual , with meter corresponding to heart-beat. But hey what do I know I'm just nuts ! Doc |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doc~ I got the visuals and found the subject matter intriguing. A lot of work is what I see - Whewwwwwwwwww ! I didn't find it scary but did find it sad. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
good one Doc! verrrry interesting. verrrry spooky. Krawdad |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Incredible workmanship here! I don't think I could have done it! I got a sad image too. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I've gotta give this one a prize, Doc... It's really quite brilliantly done... I can't imaging the work that went into it. What a poetic portrait you've painted... Nice one, my friend..  |
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