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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap 
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This is one of the two of these little nasties hat I've managed to contrive in my dark poetic past -- LOL. I chose this one because it bemoans the strictures (and limitations) of the form ... With Apologies Creating song in verse Creating song in verse This poet's happiness This poet's happiness This happiness in verse Creating poet's song; Of words composed in play Of words composed in play An artful parody An artful parody In parody composed An artful play of words. Pride wrought of artist's skill Pride wrought of artist's skill Regrets an empty well Regrets an empty well An empty pride well wrought Regrets of artist's skill; Composed in poet's words, An artful song of play; Creating happiness. An artist's pride regrets This parody of skill Well-wrought in empty verse! Never underestimate the power of stupid people in large numbers. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Skyfyre, To my way of thinking ( which may be a little skewed )this is an excellent rendering of a very demanding form . Doc |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
once again, I am amazed at how you can untangle words and put them back together using such a difficult form! I guess some have it and some (me) don't! Nice job! |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Sky, once again, a superb job. I must echo Debbie in my appreciation for your talent in rewriting such lovely lines into equally beautiful perfectly coherent measures. Bravo! ~ Beth |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL... Do I detect a bit of poetic lachrymation here?... Of course, even your muttering is well done...  |
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