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jbouder
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since 1999-09-18
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Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash

0 posted 2000-09-13 10:38 AM



The open button commanded
My complete attention,
With the soft, firm voice
Of its siren whisper
And the lure of flowered breath
Touched with Amber Romance
Enticing me toward the Pirate’s Cove,
Damning rocks and reefs,
For one, brief chance to press my lips
Against those sun-kissed shores.

***

Nan:  Sorry if this is too racy ... feel free to yank it if you think you must.  

© Copyright 2000 Jim Bouder - All Rights Reserved
Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA
1 posted 2000-09-14 05:28 PM


Jim,
I don't know about too racy , but you might get a mouth full of sand if you go around kissing the shore .
Doc

Nan
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2 posted 2000-10-02 08:47 PM


Racy? We can do racy... as long as we're as subtly racy as you are... I like this one, Jim.. I do, I do...
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