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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Three dread the dawn, the slave, the thief, and the lover. For three, the world is small, the dreamer, the ambitious, the star-gazer. Life is too short for three, the happy, the greedy, the old. The wise, the brave, and the good, these three shall know no fear. |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Ted: I like what you've done with this poem. It looks to me that you have incorporated all of the requisite elements and even pulled off a few inner-line parallelisms well. Good work. Jim |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Ted, You made this look so easy and I thought it was a very difficult assignment Very well done Liz |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great stuff here... Ted regards, sudhir |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nicely done, Ted - You've developed your theme, done it succinctly, and Jim says you followed the rules... Success is good..  |
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