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S3NSATION18
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since 2000-01-26
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0 posted 2000-01-28 11:24 AM


did i scare you off?
was i not enough?
what did i do?

i gave you something
words cannot explain
what did i do?

i'm suffering inside
hiding myself through the outside
what did i do?

i gave you a special piece of myself
you took advantage of that
what did i do?

now i'm stuck with a soul inside
and guess what? you dont even care.
what did i do?

my friends have been here through everything
and you...havent even tried
what did i do?

i'm suffering because it's not enough
i need someone's help,comfort, and support
what did i do?

when that person that i need support and comfort from is you
what did i do?

you say hello and good-bye
but you dont show ne you want to be here
what did i do?

do you care?
do you want to take part?
i can't have this baby alone
i'm scared that maybe it's not there anymore

let me know
what did i do wrong?




 

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-01-28 11:31 AM


Life's a bitch ain't it? Oh well, don't waste yourself on people who don't care. There are so many people out there who do. Really nice poem.
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