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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2000-01-27 05:18 PM



It's time the old man says goodbye,
I've enjoyed my short time here,
I see budding talent here that thrives,
Some brings flowing tears.

Don't grow up too damn quick,
Enjoy your wonderful teens,
They're by far the best years,
Your life will ever bring.

Pick your friends intelligently,
Make decisions based on thought,
Don't let anyone lead ya astray,
Don't give yourself for naught!

And all of you young ladies,
Don't let the guys cause you woes,
With promises they make to lead you,
Into a situation out of your clothes.

All of this will come in time,
When ya find the right guy,
Till then just enjoy your youth,
Instead of looking back asking yourself why!

See ya kids!!!!



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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-01-27 06:56 PM


I hate to see you go Toe. It was nice having some elderly company here for a while. Please stop in when ever you feel like it.  
Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 2000-01-27 07:09 PM


awww  you're leaving?! how come?!  great poem... and us teenz will miss you lots...

 Regret for things you did maybe tempered by time, regret for things you Didn't do, however, is inconsolable...
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 2000-01-27 09:52 PM


It is indeed a shame to see you go, Toe.  Thanks for the advice and the laughs you've offered us, it is much appreciated!  Please return again sometime!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


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