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Madden18 Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 18Connecticut |
Sky Islands Walking along in the warm sand Alone by yourself or holding a hand Feeling the warmth of the sun's hot rays A sense of utopia, lost in a daze A soothing ocean breeze blows of salt Here in your place in Heavens Vault The water is clean, a crisp clear blue The sound of waves crashing is nothing but true Walking along the water everybody knows That wonderful feeling of foamy water soaking between your toes Sitting back, with a mixed drink or wine To realize it's only the sweetest decline A world that is made of fire-not ice What you want it to be-your own paradise In this place there is wrong only just right No reason for war, no reason to fight A place of success, of goals to strive A place where you say it's good to be alive A place where the sun sets and the sky changes color And the starry night is one like no other You're never really tired, you don't need to sleep And the stars in the sky do anything but weep You belong up there, high high above With feelings of Joy,Passion,Romance and Love It's a place where you go when you're down or sad It's a place where you go when life's dismal or mad It could be a place to get better health But it's dedicated to the finding of one's innerself Who they are, their joy and their pride To prove to themselves that they don't need to hide Everyone has a place to run, to get away Whether it's temporary, or for good, it's a place to stay Everyone who goes needs to learn how to fly For it's their only way to get to their Island in the sky |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Wow. This is really good...especially for your first post. I really look forward to reading more of your work. Keep up the good work!!  ~Sarah |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Wow, man, I mean, geeze, you have some major talent. Your poems(I also read the other one) are incredible, they left me speechless If I may ask, how old are you? Judging by the quality of yer poems I would think yer way too old to be in the teen forum Excellent work, I look foreward to reading more.I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Oh yea, BTW, welcome to passions, heh I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Nights Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 56 |
That was a really good poem, i loved the ending lines. You have some real talent...keep writing, i hope to read more from you. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful piece and I will be looking forward to reading more of you. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Welcome indeed! Beautiful work! Those fantasy worlds of ours are a great thing, aren't they? And you did a great job with this one. I will be looking for more! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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abra-cadabra Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 75Florissant, Missouri, USA |
Wow. This is beautiful. i can't wait to see more of your work. Keep it up! |
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eve_angel Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 23Australia |
wow.....this is a really good first post. i see you have a lot of talent. keep em coming. |
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Penelope Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
I really can only echo what everyone else has already said: Wow! Can't wait to read some more.-Penny My advice in life is; talk to yourself, you never know what you'll learn. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Another wow! Welcome to Passions! I really liked this poem! It has the same idea as one I wrote awhile ago. Keep up the good work!"To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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