A hidden love (thank you DC)

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A hidden love (thank you DC)

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-01-23 11:36 AM

I never expected to fall in love,
With someone I considered "just a friend"
Until, one day I heard someone from above,
From that day, I knew he'd be there 'till the end.

Love often comes out of nowhere,
All too often your true love is the one you overlook.
My feelings, I did not share,
But he read my face like a book.

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 01-25-2000).]

Mistikman
Senior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA

1 posted 2000-01-23 11:53 AM

How about "Friends no more"? good poem too, btw

DC
Junior Member

since 2000-01-22

Posts 13
Arkansas

2 posted 2000-01-23 12:24 PM

Good poem. I can see how it can be hard to think of a title. I think
"A Hidden Love" would be nice.

abra-cadabra
Member

since 1999-06-21

Posts 75
Florissant, Missouri, USA

3 posted 2000-01-23 02:22 PM

Good poem. Very nicely said. How about "The Unexpected" for a title?

Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

4 posted 2000-01-23 04:21 PM

good poem
"friends til the end"?

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19

Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

5 posted 2000-01-23 10:08 PM

i'm not very imaginative
i like dc's hidden love
this was a very nice poem
very sweet
keep em' comin'

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 2000-01-24 12:02 PM

Good work! I too liked "Hidden Love" or maybe "A Love From Nowhere"? keep it up!

*Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

7 posted 2000-01-25 03:24 PM

thank you to every one that commented...and if you knew the situation in which this has happened, you would agree as well that DC's title was the best

*how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?*

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