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Zombie Man
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52

0 posted 2000-01-22 12:17 PM

I ask myself everyday is this love of ours true?
Is it going to last for a long time to come?
Or just a short while that will soon fade away.
Not one day goes by when my mind don't think of you.
I know I love you and you love me.
And I do believe we will stay together.
While my life changes all because of you.
Darkness and agony leave my head.
When your love and joy floods my heart.
Because of what you have done I thank you.
I don't really know anything I can do.
But I do know what to say.
I love you !!

© Copyright 2000 Michael Cheeseman II - All Rights Reserved
since 1999-06-21
Posts 75
Florissant, Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-01-22 04:40 AM

Ilove this poem!  It's beautiful.  I think it's better than any kind of "i love you" poems I've written. Wow.
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-01-22 11:42 AM

This poem reminds me so much of my boy-friend and I. I really like this one ALOT.
Keep it up  

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Star Fairy 2
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
3 posted 2000-01-22 05:13 PM


 Regret for things you did maybe tempered by time, regret for things you Didn't do, however, is inconsolable...

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