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Good-Bye Friend
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Good-Bye Friend |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
I would like to say good-bye but my mouth is very dry I feel really bad and I'm so so sad you put me down alot it all made me clot you were so sweet and someimes you made my heart beat you were so kind but you put me in a bind now I see the truth it was all just a fluke why were you so fake to me it hurts, but now I see you are fake to everyone even the one you love I trusted you but you lied the whole way through I opened up my heart looking for a friend but in turn you lied and all I found was the way to an end I'm sorry it turned out his way but i just have to say GOOD-BYE, I JUST WISH YOU WERE A TRUE-BLUE FRIEND (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Loved the poem steph!  good work! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Good poem! I have also had a friend betray me, and I can really relate! Good luck in your situation! "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Bump! (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I like this one...I would guess you wrote it a while back, looking at who has replied... Thanks for *bumping* it up cos it sure is the first time I saw it! Love and hugs, Lizzie PS What is a true-blue friend? I haven't heard this phrase before! "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Thank you! Hmm...true-blue friend? I don't really know? I just thought it was neat. Then again, it might sound better if it was "GOOD-BYE, I JUST WISH YOU WERE A TRUE-TRUE FRIEND" It was a while ago! LOL (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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