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Teen Poetry #2

I Know You

RedRose
New Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 6
St augustine Florida USA

0 posted 1999-10-14 05:13 PM

I know you
I embrace your thoughts
With an open mind.
The moon is pulling at us.
You say it is just a figment
Of my heart.
Maybe it is who cares?

You turn away from me Afraid of love.
What is so wrong with me?
What takes the place?
Of love in your soul?

Let lose don't turn away.
I hear the angels and devils
On our lips. We can't hide the
Eclipse of loves expression.
Why do you turn away?
Just let lose.

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Be BLind For A Moment, so you can see with your heart.

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

1 posted 2000-03-02 11:42 PM

I like what you have written here.
I am just a little caught up with
the word lose it seems to make more sense to me for it to be loose?

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