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Teen Poetry #2

A whole new day erupts...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-13 06:33 AM

A whole new day erupts
As needles through a thread
The winds are pierced with drops
Of tears November bled
The leaves twirl in their flight
So weak and short of breath
While reaching for new height
They stumble into depth
Of liquid colored skies
They fall among their peers
And echoes of their cries
Still roam deserted years

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

1 posted 2000-03-02 11:48 PM

You are so good with imagery
it is definately a strong
aspect of writing for you
keep working it so we can
keep reading it.

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