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Teen Poetry #2
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abra-cadabra
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since 1999-06-21
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Florissant, Missouri, USA
0 posted 2000-01-20 07:02 PM



My heart pounding
My body is numb
The coldness, still seeping in
The warm sun, slowly rising
But with a mountainous roar
Tucked up behind a cloud
There, away from the world
Is this eternal paadise?
I can feel the rays peeking out
Falling down on me
The cool water crashing
My feet sinking in
Meshing with sand and water
The rage of the sea
Burning with passion
Calming my mind
But set fire to my heart

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Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
1 posted 2000-01-21 01:57 AM

wow! such powerful words. keep it up!  

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."
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