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A Single Rose |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
This is a poem i wrote after breaking up with my b/f... A Single Rose The last rose he gave me stands alone in its vase. I stare at his picture with an empty face. The shadows in my heart can not be turned away So I will suffer with them until my dying day. I see his shadow everywhere, but him i do not see. So i just sit staring at the last rose given to me. What I feel in my heart hardly anyone knows for all my feelings are trapped... within a single rose. well? What did ya'll think? "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I understood where your poem was coming from. I really liked it. I felt the same way when my boyfriend broke up with me some time ago. I think right now he feels that way about me... Anyhoo, keep up the good work! |
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Lacy J New Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 2 |
Hi, I think your poem was very beautiful, and it made me think about my boyfriend and what we are and what we will be when we break up. thanx Lacy J |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
I really liked this poem. It put into words what everyone feels at the close of a relationship. Great job! ~Sarah |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Very beautiful and heartfelt, I love it. I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thank you all for your replies! I appreciated them alot! You have no idea how much it meant to me! Thanks again  Lavada |
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