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Zombie Man
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 52
Va

0 posted 2000-01-17 04:26 PM



Whenever I look at you my body stops.
My head doesn't know what to do.
While my eyes start to make teardrops.
I remember at times we did argue.
And now we don't talk.
between us stands a door that we won't unlock.
I try so hard to break it.
But I just can't do it alone.
Instead you just decided to quit.
And in your head I am unkown.
why can't we get back together.
When you where with me my life was so much brighter.
It felt so right.
So I ask you again why can't we get back together?



© Copyright 2000 Michael Cheeseman II - All Rights Reserved
angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
1 posted 2000-01-18 10:20 AM


Great poem!  My ex feels the same way, and I've felt it more than once.  I hope all works out...
Kitty
Junior Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 20
Paris, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-01-19 05:18 PM


Awsome poem. I can tell its from the heart. I hope things work out for the best.

 He has made everything beautiful in its time
Ecclesiastes 3:11

Kitty

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-01-19 05:39 PM


Hey, i really hope that you can find a way to resolve your situation. Best of luck!

 

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