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foolinlove New Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 5 |
I am very confused my heart is all brused I feel like I've been used And Wrongfully accused I am very scared of loosing a passion I shared It is what I always feared but I will always hold her dear I am never afraid but scared to death wishing she had never left She is the best I've treated her better than the rest Having to fight the pain holding back the tears that want to fall with the rain Even if make it to fame I shall never be the same My heart filled with shame I thought I was the game yet I'm not even a mouse I have my self to blame and deserve to be in a mental house I want for ppl to hear what I say and read what I feel and make compliments or completes either one just tell the truth on what you think of this poem so please respond. Thanks Brandon Superman Westley (foolinlove) |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
the rhyming, flowing, scheme of things of the poem were written very well... great job! Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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