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Missing You |
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ILoveSrfrs Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 69California |
When there's no rings from the phone My feelings are unshown And I am all alone I'll be missing you When the draft comes strong And those nights are so long And the whole world knows that something's wrong I'll be missing you When my days are grey And the nights are so much longer than the day And I know it will never be OK I'll be missing you When I'm hurting too much to cry And my lungs are even too tight to sigh And I feel like I want to die I'll be missing you When your not by my side And I won't tell you because I have too much pride And It might have felt like I have already died I'll be missing you When my love I can no longer send We have both come to the end And I know that your no longer my boyfriend I'll still be missng you. |
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nicnac8 Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46New York, N.Y. USA |
Wow! cool poem. very touching.I liked it alot keep up the good work. "it is better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all." "All hearts are broken, beware of those who never pick up the pieces." ~nicnac8 |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
This one hit my sore spot... you did a wonderful job at expressing yourself... keep up the good work.... Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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