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ILoveSrfrs
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since 1999-11-14
Posts 69
California

0 posted 2000-01-16 12:40 PM


When there's no rings from the phone
My feelings are unshown
And I am all alone
I'll be missing you

When the draft comes strong
And those nights are so long
And the whole world knows that something's wrong
I'll be missing you

When my days are grey
And the nights are so much longer than the day
And I know it will never be OK
I'll be missing you

When I'm hurting too much to cry
And my lungs are even too tight to sigh
And I feel like I want to die
I'll be missing you

When your not by my side
And I won't tell you because I have too much pride
And It might have felt like I have already died
I'll be missing you

When my love I can no longer send
We have both come to the end
And I know that your no longer my boyfriend
I'll still be missng you.

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nicnac8
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA
1 posted 2000-01-16 01:30 AM


Wow! cool poem. very touching.I liked it alot keep up the good work.

"it is better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all."

"All hearts are broken, beware of those who never pick up the pieces."


~nicnac8

Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 2000-01-16 05:36 PM


This one hit my sore spot... you did a wonderful job at expressing yourself... keep up the good work....

 Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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