Broken (repost-please reply!)

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Broken (repost-please reply!)

ILoveSrfrs
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since 1999-11-14

Posts 69
California

0 posted 2000-01-15 10:47 PM

How could you break it?
It was so strong with super-glue
It seemed like there wasn't anything
That anyone could do

Could do to melt the steel
That was keeping it together
But it started melting
When you said we were 'forever'

How did you break my heart
When I was so strong inside?
And you broke it more and more
All those times you lied

It was shattered, broken beyond repair
And that sad part is
that no one, especially you,
seemed to care

You left me all alone
Broken heart in hand
Now so weak inside
that I could hardly stand

Stand the pain inside of me
That was tearing me apart
It was once held with super-glue
Now it's just a broken heart

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

1 posted 2000-01-15 11:01 PM

Lovely. I can relate to this one, brings back a lot of memories. Very nice.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

2 posted 2000-01-16 05:50 PM

different perspective.. beautifully described... great job...

Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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