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edgar_derby
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since 2000-01-11
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0 posted 2000-01-11 09:24 PM

This has been deleted because of the use of vulagarities. The poet has been contacted about the indisgresion.

Thankyou,
Marilyn.

[This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 01-11-2000).]
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Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
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1 posted 2000-01-11 10:52 PM

This was a good poem. However, I will remind you because one of the moderators here will, that using asterisks in place of obscenities is highly discouraged.  Your poem can be just as good without the language that you used! Other then that, it was good.
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