Tragic Love? (Written For LoveBug)

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Tragic Love? (Written For LoveBug)

Jer
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since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

0 posted 2000-01-11 02:37 AM

A love so tragic,
You could not understand.
The rioting chaos she must feel inside.
Knowing she can’t seem to tell him,
The love that she has.

The pain,
The manipulators,
I believe it’s the killing of her.
Knowing her love could be rejected.
Would it be worth the risk she asks.

Yet, I have hope
That her love will become strong,
And melt the wall of ice
That stands so great between them.
And may that evoke emotions,
To bring then to a New World.

* LoveBug: I hope you eventually get all the love you deserve, but this was just a little bit of friendship love to help you get by. *

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2000-01-11 03:18 PM

Oh, thank you so much! No one has ever written a poem for be before! And one as good as this... Thank you for your friendship! You discribed my feelings perfectly. I, too, hope that I'll be with the guy I love soon!

"To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

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