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Cutter's Song |
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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
The pins in my hands, the cuts on my arms, What do they say? What do they mean? You tell me I'm manic, You tell me I'm depressive, But how do these words help ease my pain? The pins come out The scars may heal. but their fading won't affect how I feel. Chaos circles throughout my head I feel as though I might better be dead. Then the pins return The scars come back There is no pain Just quick release Then again I vow, Never Again! But it's really just A matter of when. ------------------ "Lost time is never found again." -Ben Franklin. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Matt, I told you in OP3 that this was a wonderful poem, and I'll repeat it here. Self mutilation is a terrible thing...but it affects more people than one would think. Now if you can find an incentive, a reason,to stop....most of the battle is won right there. It worked for me. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
yeah, my original post was here, but with all the chaos of the server switch it looked as though this might never be back. Anyway, I've only done it once and haven't since. I try to write a poem about all my significant experiences in life however, despite whether they're continued or one-time actions. ------------------ "Lost time is never found again." -Ben Franklin. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
I have to say that this is something I can relate to.  When I was thirteen, I went through the whole self-mutilation thing. It's something that I hate, because I have been left with multiple scars. Not only physically, but mentally, and emotionally also. I really liked the poem though......  ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
what force brought me to read this poem, now instead of the other times when i passed it by, now 2 min after i let myself bleed, now after i cried my heart out to the knife? |
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Shasta Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24st augustine florida |
Very real. I liked it alot. ------------------ You onnly have one llife, Think about it |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I can totally relate to you...people think i'm crazy for being a self mutilator but that's just how i cope (i know it's not good) but i dont know what else i could do...got any suggestions? email them to me please?? thanks guys! ***************** starboards ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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